COMEDY Best Scene Script Reading of CESAR & MAX, by Susan Klos

 

Genre: comedy, road trip, coming of age, bromance

When teenaged boys, Cesar and Max, best friends from very different socio-economic backgrounds, get into trouble at home and at school, they take off to Mexico in search of Cesar’s long lost father and along the way learn the importance of friendship and family.

CAST LIST:

Narrator: Sean Ballantyne
Max: Nick Baillie
Cesar: Hugh Ritchie
Velo: Allan Michael Brunet
Espie: Sarah Evelyn

Get to know the writer:

 1. What is your screenplay about?

“Cesar and Max” is about two 17 year old best friends. Max, is the son of a well-to-do attorney and stay at home mom who are going through a divorce, and Cesar, is the son of an illegal Mexican immigrant single mom struggling as a housekeeper. The boys get into trouble at home and at school for which Max, with his lawyer dad’s help, only gets a slap on the wrist, but finds Cesar in deep trouble when his mom does not show up to court fearing deportation. Instead of suffering the consequences of being put in juvie or a group home, Cesar decides to run away to Mexico to find his long-lost father. Max has had enough of his parent’s fighting and decides to join him. The boys have many adventures and mis-adventures (as only immature teenaged boys can) along the way, and learn the value of friendship and family.

2. What genres does your screenplay fall under?

Comedy
Bromance
Roadtrip
Coming-of age

3. Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It it topical in today’s society, dealing not only with stereotypical teenaged boy hijinks and stupidity, but also in the current political environment with so much controversy over illegal immigrants, Dreamers, and tensions between the US and Mexico over the Trump administrations policies. It also exemplifies how two people, from totally different backgrounds, can create a bond of friendship that overcomes their differences, obstacles and adversities.

4. How would you describe this script in two words?

Fun, interesting.

5. What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

The Big Lebowski.

6. How long have you been working on this screenplay?

I wrote “Cesar and Max” when I was in the Professional Program in Screenwriting at UCLA many years ago. Life and finances got in the way, so I shelved it until just recently. And now there’s some great opportunities in the screenplay for Trump jokes. I hope I can get an agent or production company interested in my script to one day see it up on the “big screen.”

7. How many stories have you written?

2 and a half and a third. I have two completed screenplays,”Cesar and Max” and “Voices,” a nearly finished screenplay called, “I Hate You, A Love Story” and one somewhat outlined called, “Seeds of Deception.”

8. What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the most times in your life?)

Beethoven’s 6th symphony, but that’s not quite a “song.”
“Touch of Grey” by the Grateful Dead.

9. What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

Deadlines, family, a business I ran, life.

10. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

I advocate for homeless and mental health issues. I have two adult children who live me who suffer from schizophrenia.

11. You entered your screenplay via FilmFreeway. What has been your experiences working with the submission platform site?

I like FilmFreeway, better than MovieBytes. I just wish it didn’t take so much digging in these sites to find out the entry price, because often when I find this cost I discover it’s out of my price range at the moment.

12. What influenced you to enter the festival? What were your feelings on the initial feedback you received?

I needed some feedback for “Cesar and Max,” and exposure, too. I feel it could actually get made one day – low budget, no name (but up-and-coming) young cast, built in audience. My other screenplay, “Voices” has won many awards, but “Cesar and Max” has not been submitted to many competitions or festivals because of money constraints. I also thought some people might find it offensive, and some do, but the story does redeem itself beyond those objections (mostly to stereotypes and crude behaviors) but also gives my characters rich “flaws,” which makes it interesting and real. These characters are based on real boys.

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

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January 2018 COMEDY Stories, Screenplays, Short Films

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Festival for Comedy-A FilmFreeway preferred festival:

 


festival posterTOO SOON?, 3min., UK, Comedy
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festival posterJAKE & JULIA, 12min, USA, Comedy/Relationship
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festival posterALTERNATIVE MATH, 9min, USA, Comedy
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festival posterEDEN HOSTEL, 14min., Spain, Comedy/Drama
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ACTORTV SPEC Screenplay of RICK & MORTY TV Show
January 2018 Reading
by Daniel Richardson
ACTORTV Best Scene Screenplay – FUNNY FARM
January 2018 Reading
by Deshon Porter
ACTORTV Best Scene Screenplay – A MATTER OF BAD TASTE
January 2018 Reading
by Gene Gwynne
ACTORTV Best Scene Screenplay – CRUDE INVESTIGATIONS
January 2018 Reading
by Chris Roberts
ACTOR TV Best Scene Screenplay – ED’S DOOR AND WINDOW CO.
January 2018 Reading
by Parker Cross Jr.
ACTORTV Best Scene Screenplay – AMERICAN SCHOOL
January 2018 Reading
by Michael Hager
ACTORCOMEDY 1st Scene Screenplay – THE WRECKERS
January 2018 Reading
by Kristy Leigh Lussier
ACTORSCI-FI SHORT Screenplay – VIRTUALLY FINE
January 2018 Reading
by Gil Saint
ACTORMYSTERY Best Scene Screenplay – UNDER THE WELL
January 2018 Reading
by Max. J. Eber
ACTORCOMEDY Best Scene Screenplay – ROCK AND ROLL MOTHER TERESA
January 2018 Reading
by Stefano Jay Bozzo
ACTORCOMEDY Best Scene Screenplay – MODEL U.N.
January 2018 Reading
by KC
ACTORCOMEDY Best Scene Screenplay – MCSUCK
January 2018 Reading
by Christopher Grant & Frank Caggiano
ACTORCOMEDY Best Scene Screenplay – GRANDMA DEE AND THE LSOT CONTINENT
January 2018 Reading
by Mark Perlick
ACTORCOMEDY Best Scene Screenplay – COURTING LUCREZIA
January 2018 Reading
by Christopher Hudson
ACTORCOMEDY Best Scene Screenplay – LULLABY
January 2018 Reading
by Peter E. Agbonifo

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

COMEDY Best Scene Reading of MCSUCK, by Christopher Grant Frank Caggiano

CAST LIST:

Counter Girl – Victoria Urquhart
Narration – Julie C. Sheppard
Tommy – Sean Ballantyne
Frankie – Geoff Mays
Drive thru teen – Hugh Ritchie

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

COMEDY Best Scene Reading of LULLABY, by Peter E. Agbonifo

 

CAST LIST:

Armstrong – Hugh Ritchie
Denzel – Sean Ballantyne
Narration – Lada Darewych
Cleo – Geoff Mays
Monica – Victoria Urquhart

Get to know the writer:

 1. What is your screenplay about?
It is about a guy who disguises to an old man (grandpa) to lull some kids spying on him whenever he is with his girlfriend, causing some trouble for him with his elder brother who he lives with, and how he suddenly got entrapped with the promised of a great wealth from the grandma of one of the kids who is falling in love with him (grandpa) and also seeking a relationship. It shows how he lusted over the great wealth, the difficulties he faced while trying to stay in the relationship with the Grandma and how he eventually submitted and gave up.

2. What genres does your screenplay fall under?
Comedy

3. Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?
It should be made into a movie because it is entertaining, captivating, inspiring and a four-Quadrant Film appealing equally to all four demographics – young and old, male and female.

4. How would you describe this script in two words?
Entertaining and Captivating.

5. What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Comedy movies (I don’t know if I answered this right for you).

6. How long have you been working on this screenplay?
I have been working on it since 2003.

7. How many stories have you written?
9 (Nine) feature length screenplays

8. What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the most times in your life?)
Gospel praise song

9. What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?
The obstacle I faced to finishing this screenplay is the fact that I am not based in the environment where I want the screenplay to be performed, and I have not even been there before. It is continent apart.

10. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?
I am also passionate about making good movies.

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

COMEDY Best Scene Reading of COURTING LUCREZIA, by Christopher Hudson

CAST LIST:

Murray – Geoff Mays
Doorman – Sean Ballantyne
Narration – Hugh Ritchie
Evelyn – Julie C. Sheppard
Lucille – Victoria Urquhart

Get to know the writer:

 1. What is your screenplay about?

Dracula comes out of retirement to take a bite out of the Big Apple in
a quirky, romantic comedy that pays homage to classic cinematic battles
between the sexes.

Posing as Sir John Renfield, a successful English Barrister,
Dracula’s on a mysterious mission to Manhattan, to see a brilliant young
scientist, Dr. Victor Potemkin. Victor has invented a miraculous serum that
promises eternal life, but he’s been cheated out of his discovery by
his former employer, Evelyn Ferret, and her inept scientist boy-toy, Dr.
Murray Cravenwitz. For reasons unknown to Victor at the time, Dracula
agrees to represent him in a lawsuit.

Evelyn’s attorney is Lucille Borget, known in legal circles as “The
Barracuda,” she’s never lost a case. But Lucille has a dark
secret. She’s really the legendary sorceress Lucrezia Borgia –
Dracula’s lover from the sixteenth Century. They’re shocked to find each
other after crossing oceans of time and the flames of their passion are
quickly rekindled. Only Dracula and Lucrezia know the secret of her
eternal youth.

Lucille tries to persuade Dracula to settle Victor’s case out of
court, but she inadvertently makes light of his legal competency, and
he’s spoiling for a fight, so the strange case goes to trail. They agree
to keep it friendly in court – no funny stuff, but they don’t trust
each other for a New York minute. Their verbal swordplay escalates into a
supernatural donnybrook with hilarious consequences.

2. What genres does your Screenplay fall under?

Comedy … however, but at it’s core, it is a romantic comedy … with a twist.

3. Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

A funny and entertaining story that would appeal to a wide audience.

4. How would you describe this script in two words?

Drac’s back.

5. What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

I love movies, so this is a a toughy … but probably Casablanca … I never miss it when it shows up on TCM.

6. How long have you been working on this script?

Ten years.

7. How many stories have you written?

Two books (Headwind and Northern Cross, both on Amazon) and two screenplays.

8. What is your favorite song?

That would be impossible to say … kinda like, what is your favorite breath of air?

9. What obstacles did you face in finishing this screenplay?

Working with a co-writer (Marcel DeClercq) presented some challenges because we weren’t working in the same space, so it was passed back and forth many, many times.

10. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

That one is easy … music. I perform … casually … under the banner of Aerial M.

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

COMEDY Best Scene Reading of GRANDMA DEE AND THE LOST CONTINENT, by Mark Perlick

 CAST LIST:

Assistant 1 – Geoff Mays
Assistant 2 – Hugh Ritchie
Narration – Lada Darewych
Red – Victoria Urquhart
Smiling man – Sean Ballantyne
Grandma Dee – Julie C. Sheppard

Get to know the writer:

1. What is your screenplay about?

It’s about a woman, who, after a traumatic tour as a nurse in Vietnam,
believes that her redemption will come when she finds the Atlantean Hall of
Records.

2. What genres does your screenplay fall under?

Comedy/metaphysical

3. Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It’s a comedy that takes itself seriously. It’s about characters who revel
in the absurdities of life.

4. How would you describe this script in two words?

Glorious obsession

5. What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Dr. Strangelove

6. How long have you been working on this screenplay?

I’ve worked on this screenplay off and on for two years with multiple
rewrites.

7. How many stories have you written?

I’ve written at least twenty screenplays and many short plays that were
performed on stage.

8. What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the most
times in your life?)

My favorite musical piece is the first movement of Beethoven’s Moonlight
Sonata. I’ve learned to play the piano just to play that piece. I no longer
play the piano, but cherish every note of that adagio.

9. What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

My biggest obstacle was keeping the humor and the relationships fresh and
honest.

10. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

My other passion is rock climbing and writing software.

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox

COMEDY Best Scene Reading of LOS BEVERLY HILLS, by B. Daniel Martinez

 

CAST LIST:

Michelle – Lada Darewych
Elena – Victoria Urquhart
Narration – Geoff Mays
Johnny – Sean Ballantyne
Alma – Julie C. Sheppard
Victor – Hugh Ritchie

Get to know the writer:

 1. What is your screenplay about?

When the Fuentes family is evicted from their East L.A. home, Fate lends a helping hand. The widow Johnny Fuentes works for dies leaving her mansion and fortune to Johnny, resulting in his family relocating to Beverly Hills. But getting accepted by their new neighbors won’t be easy. And it won’t be easy for the Fuentes family to accept their neighbors.

2. What genres does your screenplay fall under?

Comedy.

3. Why should this screenplay be made into a movie?

It has a message that differences in cultures and/or thinking shouldn’t be a reason for discriminating against one another. Both sides must find a common ground and grow together.

4. How would you describe this script in two words?

Getting along.

5. What movie have you seen the most times in your life?

Probably all of the Harry Potters.

6. How long have you been working on this screenplay?

Six months.

7. How many stories have you written?

Too many to count. I written several scripts and three novels.

8. What is your favorite song? (Or, what song have you listened to the
most times in your life?)

I’m a former longtime Los Angeles radio personality so I have many favorite songs. Picking one is like asking which arm do you want to keep? My tastes vary but two of my favorites are Santana – Samba pa ti and The Beach Boys – God Only Knows. But my musical tastes range from classical (Beethoven, Mozart, Vivaldi) to hard rock and some of the current music.


9. What obstacles did you face to finish this screenplay?

None.

10. Apart from writing, what else are you passionate about?

Music.

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Producer: Matthew Toffolo http://www.matthewtoffolo.com

Director: Kierston Drier
Casting Director: Sean Ballantyne
Editor: John Johnson

Camera Operator: Mary Cox